I love the art style and the music. The setting and story are way more engaging than a typical "dungeon crawl." I have a couple of constructive suggestions for when you have more time! :) 1. Make it possible to click to advance the text animation (I clicked continue to speed up the text anim, but it moved to next screen. Maybe first click just shows the whole paragraph.) 2. It would be a nice polish to make the animated words not "half appear" on a line before wrapping to the next line. 3. Too much text at the beginning, maybe? A lot of the back story would be awesome to bring out in later encounters. Keep going, team! This is a lovely start. :D
Thank you so much for your feedback! I definitely agree with all the points you made. :) Once the game jam voting period is over, we’ll be going back to touch up quite a few things. Thanks again!
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I love the art style and the music. The setting and story are way more engaging than a typical "dungeon crawl." I have a couple of constructive suggestions for when you have more time! :) 1. Make it possible to click to advance the text animation (I clicked continue to speed up the text anim, but it moved to next screen. Maybe first click just shows the whole paragraph.) 2. It would be a nice polish to make the animated words not "half appear" on a line before wrapping to the next line. 3. Too much text at the beginning, maybe? A lot of the back story would be awesome to bring out in later encounters. Keep going, team! This is a lovely start. :D
Thank you so much for your feedback! I definitely agree with all the points you made. :) Once the game jam voting period is over, we’ll be going back to touch up quite a few things. Thanks again!